mrBLUE9 wrote:I think Daskro forgot to post it here but he already released the Alborz round from the 04/06 battleday with multi-POV commentary.
Sirslicey was the co-commentator:
nice one, just a couple of comments:
1) not only from this POV, it seems like you tend to go to jets/choppers POVs. maybe its because their rapid movement or that always shooting something, but it tells very little on whats going on.
2) i think it would be better to pause your discussion occasionally and point stuff that happens on the screen.
it actually looks like you are so busy cycling through the POVs and trying to think about questions for the other commentator you don't notice stuff going on the screen.
for example towards the end were both LOD TDs fight KART TDs on Echo, and there are KART RPGs on the golf ball that shoot the LOD armor, and although Gwynz0r points it out with the MAV, the armor doesn't seem to notice.
also i guess its pretty hard to listen to the game comms at the same time, but they say 'lets push em', so you could switch to gwynzors cam and show how the armor battle ended.
when gynzor says "push X" you should point out LOD is going to push X now, 'lets see how it goes' and switch to a POV of someone who's going there. (done nicely with expandas/mrblue at the Delta cap at the end)
or when the end of the round is near, i think you should be relaying the last movements e.g. LOD makes a push towards Delta to stop the bleed, and we see that they got another squad flanking to Alpha just in case, looks like they are assuming KART is holding spawn, or trying to force them to spawn to win the round....
and a more emphasize on KART taking the bleed and bleeding out LOD significantly like "would KART win this map after bleeding for so long?" "it doesn't look good for LOD"... "they have to do something to stop the bleed soon or they'll loose" stuff like that. "looks like everything they are trying fails", "taking X didn't work/worked nicely"
just try making it seem more dynamic as its hard to tell from the video the moves, and it looks like a stalemate from the start to the end.
